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ABSTRACT EXAMPLES Abstract  Water covered about 71 percent of the earth’s surface; it should be accessible. We cannot just take random water and drink it, due to the effect of the water on our body. Our body requires purified water, one and easy way to get purified water is by distillation. Although water covered more than the half percentage of the earth's surface, distilled water is yet inaccessible in many countries. It is important that people have access to water, there is portable and attainable distilled water equipment that could be shared with other countries. Engineers find an easy way to spread distilled water to other countries without having small equipment that can be embarrassing. It is a better way for a poor country to not worry about access to distilled water. ABSTRACT:  Electric vehicles, an innovative model of transportation, renowned companies that build vehicles are making a change from fuel to electrically operated. Greater divers...
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Instruction Paper

LOW STAKES EXAMPLES FROM THE CLASS, Friday Apr. 24, 2020  TF  comments are in bold, but I welcome your comments in the comments section: During this time of quarantine , it's important to stay sane and realize that this pandemic may be prolonged and what better way to maintain sanity than to keep busy. This is a great opportunity to learn something new. This homemade lightbulb experiment is not only simple and fun but allows you to be creative due to its malleability. You only need   [ With ] simple ingredients :   [We don't need to use a sentence fragment.]  a   [ A ]  pack of batteries,two clear different sized cups(large and small),two copper wires with 4 small alligator clips, lead, tape.   The Set Up 1.tape all of your batteries from your pack (fair amount [This expression could be confusing; just say 2-4)  2-4) together ensuring that the opposite forces are stuck to each other (+/-) 2.will [You don't need will--wh...
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Memo

Sample outlines (anonymously presented): Context:  The subject matter of the memo will contain information about bridge inspections and provide recommendations on how to perform better inspections in order to avoid structure failures and improve the detection of potential structural issues in a timely manner.  Task Segment : This section will provide details on how a recent statistical report showed a rise in component failures in various structures and the actions that need to be taken to improve these numbers, e.g. a re-evaluation of the company inspection manual and considering the recommended modifications.  Discussion Segments : This section will begin with a background on the subject matter and why it is crucial that the company re-considers current inspection protocols due to an increased number of structural issues reported recently. It will provide several recommendations (in bullet points) on how to make improvements to these protocols to increase the lo...
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